Wednesday 16 March 2011

Through Crimson Eyes

Sitting idle helps me think of ideas and now I need a name for this idea. Here's the story, please tell me if anything needs changing and help me think of a name for it:

Year 2011, people of Estrife lead a peaceful life. Men went to work, children went to school, everything was fine, except for the shadows. For in the shadows lurked the creatures known as the Unseen. The Unseen targeted humans and ate them which helped them in becoming stronger. The Unseen were creatures which could not be seen with the naked eye despite their huge size, the only one who could see them is a 15-year old boy Matt Crimson. Matt has unusual eyes which can turn Crimson Red which allow him to see the Unseen. His father was a well known priest who used to save people from the Unseen but 3 years ago he mysteriously disappeared without a trace. Matt looked into his father's notes and got a clue where his father might be. And the only one who might know about his father's whereabouts was Shinosuke Takahara, an old friend of Matt's father. Matt went to old man Takahara to question him about his father. Takahara put up a deal that if he would take care of the Unseen lurking in the shadows, he'll tell him and gives Matt a Scythe which he can summon anytime. Later on, Matt is joined by two more people, Katie and Kai who help Matt in finding his father and saving the world from the clutches of the Unseen.

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