Wednesday 16 March 2011

Through Crimson Eyes - Episode 1 |Crimson Eyes|

So, here's the episode 1 of Through Crimson Eyes. Expect more to come and feedback would be appreciated :3

"Unngghh.... who's calling my name this early in the morning..."

Matt walks to the window and looks down, Matt sees a girl yelling

Girl: "Matt!! Come on already!! It's school tiimme!!!".

Matt: "Not her again..."

Matt walks away from the window. He takes out his school uniform and

starts wearing it. After done changing, he takes his bag and opens the

door and walks out. While heading for the stairs, Matt stops at the

door of his father's Study Room. After a few seconds, he continues

walking down and goes to the kitchen.

Matt's mother: "Oh Matt! You're awake. Good Morn-"

Matt: "Good Morning mother."
replies Matt to her mother who was about to finish her sentence.

Matt's mother: "Oh, well here's your breakfast. Eat it on your way,

okay?"

Matt nods to what her mother said and leaves the house.

Matt's mother: "After all these years, he still hasn't been able to

forget you..."thinks Matt's mother to herself after seeing off Matt.

Just as Matt walks a few steps, he hears a girl shouting at him.

Girl: "Matt!! Good Morn-"

Matt: "Good Morning Katie."
Matt cuts off the girl before she could say "Good Morning" and starts

walking to his way to school.

Katie: "Matt! Wait uuupp!!"
echoes Katie's voice as she runs after Matt who went ahead of her.

Soon after that, Matt and Katie reach their school. When Matt and Katie

enter their class, the girls start whispering.

Girl 1: "Look! It's Matt!"
Girl 2: "Aah! He's so cool!"

Matt silently sits down on his chair and takes out a book from his bag

and starts reading it whereas Katie glares at those girls that are

looking at Matt with lovey-dovey eyes.

Katie: "Tch! Why do they have to be after Matt?"
Thinks Katie to herself while she sits down next to Matt.

And so the school starts. Everything goes like a flow. *ding dong ding*

The bell rings, it's home time.

Class Representative: "Stand! Bow!"

As the students start leaving, Katie quickly turns to Matt and says

Katie: "Hey Matt! Wanna ha-"

But is surprised to see Matt already gone. Katie picks up her bag and

runs out but doesn't see Matt anywhere. She runs in the halls looking

for him but he's nowhere to be found. At last, when she goes to the

back of the building, she sees Matt with a girl who's handing over a

letter to Matt.

Girl: "I... you.... I want you to... read this..."

Matt looks at the letter, then looks at the girl.

Matt: "I am sorry, but I have no intention of being involved in this

kind of relationship."

And saying so, he takes his leave. The girl breaks into tears. It does

hurt Katie how Matt reacted to her but she was thanking God on the

other side that Matt didn't accept her letter. Curious why Matt

rejected the girl, Katie follows Matt and asks him upfront.

Katie: "Why? Why did you refuse the girl's proposal?"

Matt tries to ignore Katie's question but because of her constantly

asking, he replies

Matt: "It's like I said, I don't have any intention of being in an

unnecessary relation."

Katie: "Ho-How could you say that Matt?! She was one of those girls who

like you so much. She gathered up all her courage to confess to you and

you just rejected her?!"

Matt: "......"

Katie: "Even I.... Even I like-"

Matt suddenly felt a dark presence.

Matt: "Look out!!"

Matt hurrily pushed away Katie. Katie fell on the ground.

Katie: "Matt!! What did you do that for?!"

Matt: "Run! Run away as fast as you can!"

Katie: "Huh? M-Matt? What are you-"

Matt: "I SAID RUN!!"

Upon hearing Matt yell at her, Katie quickly stood up and started

running. As soon as she got a few steps away, Matt's eyes started

turning crimson red. It was as if blood was spreading in his pupil.

Matt: "Oh no you don't!"
said Matt as he quickly held a shadowy figure's face in his hand. Matt

lifted his hand mid-air, suddenly a dark aura surrounded Matt's arm and

flowed to Matt's hand where it turned into a scythe. Matt swung the

scythe at a short-distance and cut the shadowy figure in two and it

disappeared in thin air. Matt then turned around to see lots of Unseen surrounding him and said in a calm

tone

Matt: "Alright, who's next?"

*EPISODE 1 |Crimson Eyes| END*

1 comment:

  1. It's good, but at some parts it was written more like dialogue in a book than the rest of it.
    most: 'Matt's mother: "Oh, well here's your breakfast. Eat it on your way,
    okay?"'

    other: 'Matt's mother: "Oh, well here's your breakfast. Eat it on your way,
    okay?"'

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